Slightly confused as to why you're uploading chapters again? ;

Beautiful story. I enjoyed it immensely.

I've loved horse books every since I was little, and never grew out of it. Your writing is wonderful, the drama was paced well, and your main characters were well rounded out. Loved the romance.

Thanks for posting! I hope you enjoyed writing it as much as I enjoyed reading : )

Let me just say that it's total BS for them to say there isn't a market for this. I know -nothing- about horses and horse racing and I have so enjoyed At Long Odds and Keeping The Peace. One thing I love about romance novels is that you can take anything and apply it to a romance. It's a hell of a lot better than a run-of-the-mill romance novel. Not only does it add certain elements to it (we're talking sci-fi, fantasy, mysteries, adventure, action and anything else in anyone's life), it makes the reader learn new things about something!

There was a TV show I watched about horse racing in the States (western United States) and I didn't know much about it, but it was a good show. Kinda got on the repetitive side (as many shows do) but it still made me learn something.

Thank you for writing these enjoyable stories and don't let anyone get you down!

By the way, I read At Long Odds awhile back, but never finished the whole thing. I ignored my boyfriend and my math homework all day and read it start to finish. He wasn't very happy about it, but that should show you how much I enjoyed it. :)

AHHH! Well, I have no idea how to say this. This was the best chapter ever I think, in terms of the Julian/Ginny relationship. Seriously though, I loved it. My heart is literally swelling right now. I mean, I loved the Julian/Ginny relationship from the start. And now, to see it come to such a close, is just wow!

I can honestly say that I LOVED this book to bits. It's one story I will never get tired of. I'm so glad I found it at the time. It seems so long ago, but in reality it has't really been very long. I loved being part of Ginny's life and being able to become one with the characters to experience this joy.

This truly has been a wonderful journey and i feel very remorseful to let it go.

Great job overall! I hope you have a raging success in all your projects to come.

xoxo

Beeni.

P.S. AHHHH! I love this book. :D

okay, so I decided I will review both chapters separately. And I will inform you now, I haven't read the last one yet, so this review is solely for this chapter only.

OMG! I have no idea if I want to laugh or cry, or do both at the same time. seriously, I am trembling all over to see what happens next. AHHHH!

You have no idea how well this chapter was written. I loved it! I felt almost every emotion Ginny was feeling and the loss of our dear Julian. Oh God!

Well, I shall continue to the next chapter now!:)

Beeni.

Wow, I loved that ending. My heart was pounding all the way through the race, and described is so beautifully. I think I was with them watching that race. I enjoyed how you wrote the ending. I kept wandering how you planned to finish it, and then you finished it so simply, and yet so beautifully. If publishers say your books have no market, I can tell you that many people love the Black Stallion books, which are written for children, but adults also love them. You might try publishing in America if you haven't already.

Yay the end! Theyre finally together and she won the race! Amazing story. The way you built up the suspense just made the ending more satisfying. Im glad they decided to work together too, it makes everything easier. :) Cant wait to read Designer Genes now. Thank you so much for uploading this wonderful story!

Congrats on finishing another good story! I hope you get your wish for publication.

I'm so sad that it's over, but I'm happy that they're together!

This was a wonderful story, and I loved every minute I spent reading it.

Why are they always taking a step forward and like 10 million backwards? ugh i was so happy thinking their relationship was actually going forward. I'm excited to see what goes down at Dewhurst. And i'm curious to see if she decides to downsize and move away. It looks like she will

*whistles* ABOUT TIME! haha I loved it! Their chemistry is explosive!

AAAHHH!

This chapter was just... WOW!

I loved reading it. so much tension. They both want each other more than the other. they can't control one another and yet they fight back against what is meant to happen. They both want the same prize. Damn the situation. :)

But I loved the chapter. I mean it cleared up a lot of things, like her take on things and the way Julian felt. You can tell by the way both of them act that soon enough they'll be biting at each others necks again. I can just feel that this new determination shown by Ginny is going to get somewhere. But one of them is going to do something to change this. One of them will have to. Because if they don't it will start a feud that can never end. Both of them are way too ambitious to let it go.

Once again, I loved this chapter. Great work and I can't wait to see what happens next.

Beeni. :)

Oh no...what have they done ):

They're both up for the same prize, and only one can win,

So now they're rivals, again.

This ruins everything!

They just need to kiss and make up. For real this time.

Update soon please!

This chapter wuz so sad. They cant be together cuz of their differences. Why doesnt Ginny just join Julien? I think they would work pretty well together. I hope everything turns out all rite after the race and that u get Designer Genes out soon. I cant wait to read it and find out about his sis. Thanx 4 updating! :)

I feel sorry for those two. They keep dancing around and hurting each other with words. If only so much wasn't at stake, but as with much in life, they are competing against each other.