Reviews for Metapolica
Wintergreen chapter 1 . 1/24/2017
So many fantasy stories are from the point of view of younger people. It's so cool to see older people's points of view! You skip tenses a little, I noticed, and mixed past and present tense in strange ways that made it a little confusing to read. I really was interested in the man and his life. What luck it seems he's had, to be noticed so much!
Serentium chapter 1 . 11/26/2016
Wow, loved the writing style on this story! Well done!

Damn the empire, save the man.
LCZielinsky chapter 1 . 11/25/2016
I could see and feel the place vividly. And I loved the characterizing tone of the old man. The Prince felt youthful and mature by turns; a mark of his inexperience in leadership and yet too his clear grooming for it. The old man's awakening to an empty life was heartbreaking. And finally there was a message for the reader in the dangers to all of having an unfulfilled individual in society.
shika-paprika chapter 1 . 10/2/2016
Pretty interesting piece. While this is tagged under Sci-Fi, I did get a bit of a Fantasy vibe from reading this. You have two unique characters: the humble old man and the prince who could learn a thing or two from his modesty. Hopefully, he will as he gets older. Great work.