Reviews for The War of Wishes
Qazsedcft chapter 38 . 10/19/2011
Epic twist bringing Lita into the Ritus. And now I'm just dying to know what the whole 'red magic' thing is all about, can't wait for part 2 :)
dragonwarz50 chapter 1 . 9/21/2011
Finally, a nice story for once
Auric chapter 38 . 9/21/2011
Read the whole thing in about 1 day, and I thoroughly enjoyed it, am actually sad that the other 2nd part isnt already completed, I'd have loved to jump right into it now. Mark Chen, I like his mind or maybe its the Sherlock Holmes qoute that got me biased... -_-" anyway am not much of a critic to point out the flaws and give validative info, it was only after I read some of your reviews that I even started noticing the with-in and th-en/an scenarios the plot got me to engrossed to notice hahahaha *cough-cough* Rena... you...are A GENIUS ok maybe av seen to much anime before but it surprised me really the unfeeling thing it actually felt new maybe it was her logical base but it got me good, um I thing am raving now *scratches back of head* I think I might join just so I can follow this in its sequel which I hope is updated soon, moe, eto, O.o thanks for the good read.
draco oblivion chapter 38 . 9/2/2011
I know she doesn't care about Mark as a person but stabing him seems a waste considering all the time spent protecting him...

So Roland controls people, interesting... Rena's still better though :)

So Lita can heal people then, I'm hoping Rena knew that when she stabbed Mark :/

LOOOOOOL so she's in the Ritus too, and she's higher than Mark, LOL in his face xD

So Mark knew about her then? I'm glad they've decided to help her, it's a bit sad that Rena isn't getting any decently ranked allies though...

Aw, he's so innocent he shudders at the thought of a girl changing his clothes :3

So he's gone to the girl of dreams in order to obtain power, how exciting :D

Aw, he has to leave with no explanation, i guess it could be worth it depending on what happens when he's gone, what he learns and what the favour is...

That's pretty epic, "This is not the end" XD

Aw, and Rena mimics his last words too, those guys are so cute together X3

I'm looking forward to the next installment, I can't wait to see what Mark'll learn to do :)
draco oblivion chapter 36 . 8/17/2011
I'm late again :/

Aw, Rena's so epic but she got caught in a trap, hopefully she'll tear her way out through al those that oppose her! :D

Lol, boyfriend! XD

Oh so Marie can make people tell her things then...?

LOOOL at their unstable nature. XD

Aw, Marie seemed like a really cool character...

The reincarnation seemed like a natural law, I didn't think it'd be possible to end it...

I actually feel kind of bad for Marie :(
draco oblivion chapter 35 . 7/18/2011
Lol, how is asking them to kill Rasputin proving his loyalty?

I like how Jin's taking charge though, I really want him to join the crew but with all these dominant personalities what'll happen when the different parts meet up?

I wonder what Rasputin got out of lying about Horatio...

I hope Horatio's going to join his crew again eventually, it seems harsh not to.
draco oblivion chapter 34 . 7/7/2011
So I'm guessing that that's Mark's friend...

Yay Mark! She doesn't seem to care about his rescue attempt though does she?

Lol, those kids got owned! XD

Lol, she's trying to pretend she the oracle in the matrix XD

I'M STILL READING THIS! ...I'm only a few days late
anarhcyxpain chapter 34 . 7/5/2011
Wow its nice to see you are working on this project great chapter keep up the god work
Happy Fat Hippo chapter 1 . 4/27/2011
good start.
draco oblivion chapter 33 . 4/26/2011
I like the way you describe the voic in the beginning

The emperor seems interesting and now I'm really looking forward to seeing Mark at his peak :D
draco oblivion chapter 32 . 3/28/2011
I read this :D

I'm liking the story so far it's great. I knew Roland wasn't trustworthy...
draco oblivion chapter 31 . 2/1/2011
Wasn't expecting that... it's interesting though. :)
Qazsedcft chapter 30 . 1/25/2011
Epic twist! I'm practically bouncing off the walls waiting to find out what just happened to Mark.
draco oblivion chapter 30 . 1/25/2011
Mark reminds me of Kernel from Demon thief, because they both have the ability to see patterns in things no one else does. Kernel uses it to make portals though.
draco oblivion chapter 29 . 1/25/2011
Lol, rotation, translation and enlargement, that brings me back... to a couple of weeks ago. :P
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