|Reviews for and if I sink|
| Natasha Dust chapter 1 . 7/2/2010
That was simply lovely... absolutely fascinating writing style. The imagery and the flow of your words were great. :D
I loved the whole somber feel of the poem and the word choice. :)
I think there's a tiny error there on the 4th stanza though...
"there, if I am -I- alive" ::I don't think you need an "I" between 'am' and 'alive' there. *blush*
Keep writing and inspiring! ;D
| Tytherpol chapter 1 . 6/29/2010
i love my darkness is the sea under my belly and stanza 4
| AmintawithaRose chapter 1 . 6/26/2010
| Oscillation chapter 1 . 6/25/2010
there are so many ways to interpret water...
I love how you turned it into a barrier; a marking point
| Archia chapter 1 . 6/25/2010
I think this is really good and nice. I like the last stanza and how it's repeated from the first one.