|Reviews for Eskimo Kiss
| LongingforSweetness chapter 1 . 5/27/2014
I know this tale is done but I felt that I had to say how amazing I find this already, I am hooked on the awesomeness this author uses to tell the tale with a vivid reality. I felt I must commend thee...
| DependingonEmily chapter 29 . 1/7/2012
one word: AWWWWWWWWWW!
| api723 chapter 29 . 3/23/2011
This is amazing for a sophmore. I love Riley and Jai, and my favorite part was the punch. Lol. Too funny!
| miaaa chapter 29 . 3/6/2011
I loved this story! I seriously think you need more reviews for it, it's amazing!
| Oritreesan chapter 29 . 12/6/2010
I definately couldn't write something like this when I was 15. Amasing, cute, unique. The characters are great and I'm definately looking forward to reading more of your work!
| youngin-matomon chapter 3 . 9/4/2010
I like the first chapter very much but then...
It was stupid from the second chapter. Riley is 'shy'? why does she act so pathetic? and why can't she talk to her FRIENDS? okay, let her not talk to the other students, but her FRIENDS? come on.
"I blushed at the comment and bowed my head further over the table and pretended he said it about someone else. I was too humiliated to talk now." um, why? why is she humiliated. because she couldn't retort herself instead of letting her friend Talia do the work? then i quite agree, she should be mortified.
"shy wimps" that completely describes her. she's such a wimp. being shy doesn't necessarily mean she has to be a loser. a very bad character.
whispering? muttering? i don't get it. why can't she just TALK normally?
i suggest u re-read and rewrite the entire thing. if you want people to like her as a first character, you've got to show some of her better points. why does she have to be so... pathetic? can't u make her 'stronger' as u so bravely claimed her to be in the first chapter?
| hey chapter 29 . 7/10/2010
I love love love your story! update soon! i don't even have an account but i've been checking every day!
| Seddierocks chapter 29 . 7/7/2010
dude you need more reviews. i'm not kidding this is like awesome. there were times that i wanted to cry really. oh btw in the futre when you start going into another part in the chapter like a new section it would be pretty nice to put some astrics or something. i know people probably told you this but yeah that's my opinion. seriously though i really loved it. it would be really cool if you got this published sometime in the future. i would love to buy it and read it all over again. and then it gets turned into a movie etc. etc. lol i'm getting way ahead of myself. once again loved it.
P.S. is the story done? i'm not sure but from what i read from the last chapter i think it is. ok i'm done aggravating you
| Sky Sky chapter 29 . 7/7/2010
| BlueMoonlily chapter 29 . 7/4/2010
AWW ESKIMO KISS! hehehehehe *hearts* i love this story thank you so much for updating so much! i think im addicted! lol
| BlueMoonlily chapter 28 . 7/4/2010
hehehehe cute *hearts*
| BlueMoonlily chapter 27 . 7/4/2010
aww *hearts* so cute
i really like having jai POV chapters thats awesome! thanks so much!:D
| BlueMoonlily chapter 25 . 7/4/2010
it would be a lot easier to understand the switches in conversation like at the end of this chapter if you put a line or more space between the two just to let you know :)
| BlueMoonlily chapter 23 . 7/4/2010
hehehe i think he was the little boy who kissed her cheek to make her feel better when she fell!:D:D:D:D:D CUTE!
| Knowledge is Power chapter 29 . 7/4/2010
this is a very cute and heart warming story.. good job