Reviews for Too Far Gone
phosphenes chapter 1 . 7/5/2010
Loved it. It was short and absolutely perfect, and the last line was so powerful and a perfect way to end it. Amazing.
Whaaoouusses chapter 1 . 6/27/2010
love it. the way you wrote this poem and structured it is unique and beautiful. Especially love the first stanza!
MidnightSun95 chapter 1 . 6/26/2010
Beautiful. :) I liked the formatting. And though it didn't have strong words, the overall meaning/poem was very powerful. Great job.