thanks for the fic.

i like the way you describe the scenario. really clear and simple.

looking forward for more.

I, personally, am glad Mama and Jack did not make up.

That imbecilic asshole. I was hoping he would come back and get his ass shot.

...

But that's just me haha.

Anyways, your story was very well written and intriquing. Oh, and the sex was hot haha. I look forward to reading more from you :)

I don't think Mama should forgive Jack either! Eli's the best; I love him. When Ashton doesn't want him; I'll have him. Which means never. his feels like their should be a sequel, I don't know why, since the ending is fine, and their doesn't seem to be a lot of loose ends ... Oh well! Good story, very good story.

Awesome story! D

Loved your story! Just one question though. Did Eli give birth through his penis hole? -cringes-

Exellent story, I loved it :)

Sweet start, I can wait to read the next chapters

You didn't explain how he gave birth! YOU MUST DO THIS! Now I feel compelled to know! haha

Zompocalypse? Armadillo?

I know I'll probably find out in the next few chapters, but I don't understand how HE will get pregnant. How will he give birth? I don't understand! I try thinking about it and my brain just flits around before holding up a "DOES NOT COMPUTE" sign. haha

Excellent first chapter! I am excited to see what happens!

What a beautiful story, it's definitely going in my favorites.

This was such a good story!

Thanks for the up, highly entertaining story... I really wanted Jack and Mama to make up actually... hoping he would explain he had wanted to keep Eli when he was a baby, not as a trophy though... Oh well... YAY for pup! thanks for the up!

Faelyn is a beautiful name. More then ever they need to stay close to Mama. What do two male wolves know about raising a daughter? *smile*

Thank you.