Reviews for Rhyming
Lace-1812 chapter 1 . 8/3/2010
Three points:

1. Poetry does not need to convey a message. It needs to have good imagery, and it needs to scan.

2. This piece doesn't have a messgae anyway, it's just an endless repitition of words that sort of fit together.

3. If anything, you've proved you CAN'T rhyme.

Now, excuse me for the flame, but you wanted opinions and that is mine. On an entirely unrelated note, have you done any of the english homework yet?