Reviews for Wolf Demon |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Awwwwwwww update soon |
![]() ![]() ![]() Awww poor Kei! 3 |
![]() ![]() ![]() Key is sooo devious |
![]() ![]() ![]() I can't wait to read the next chapter |
![]() ![]() ![]() update update UPDATE! :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() please update this story soon! :D i really hope you do cuz i really like this story like all of your other ones 3 :D |
![]() ![]() when is the next chapter going to be up? |
![]() ![]() ![]() this is great! can't wait for the next chapter! |
![]() ![]() ![]() bwahahahaha i fell out of my chair laughing when he fainted. please update soon. this is hillarious! _ |
![]() ![]() ![]() aw this is a cute story :D please update soon ... cool ur last update was on my bday (: |
![]() ![]() ![]() I enjoyed reading this, it was very cute and it felt like a anime in some ways. Keep it up :) ~Kairee-Anne |
![]() ![]() ![]() this was really interesting, i like the idea a lot! just there were a lot of grammar and spelling mistakes, just an example: The teacher went back to where she was in class before Umi came and Umi toke out her books and her pencils and put it on her desk but she couldn't pay attention to the class all she was thinking was if the puppy was ok. should me more like: The teacher went back to where she had been in class before Umi came, and Umi took out her books and pencils and put them on her desk, but she couldn't pay attention to the class because all she could think of was if the puppy was okay. and there was a lot of switching between past and present tenses that was confusing, but i still really enjoyed this! i love the idea it seems like it'll be a really fun romance(: mind R&R my story Comet? if you don't mind, i'd love some feedback(: thanks! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Why is Kei so open about his identity? Do humans and demons coexist freely in this world? Just curious. )But I think its so cute how Umi put the blue ribbon on her Kei puppy. Made me want to do a fangirl squeal. lol. Nice chapter, Angellover254! Can't wait to read more! ~Much Love and Many Hugs~ Niki T. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I wonder why Kei is in the human world. This is interesting! I will be reading more soon. It will be extremely awesome to see how the relationship between Kei and Umi will develop. Well onto the next chapter! p ~Much Love and Many Hugs~ Niki T. P.S.: Sorry for the late review, I've been in the process of moving. . |