Reviews for Code Purple |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Hi :) love this story! Maybe you could let Ariel be kidnapped right in front of him :) and then let him be scared or smth. It might really prove his love towards Ariel :) anyway, update soon! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Great chapter, girl. I love how Layton didn't want to force her into it. Her story was so sad! ~Cyd |
![]() ![]() ![]() ugh why did you have to end it there? the whole water thing was not at all what I expected. I really thought that someone close to her had drowned! I also found Layton's secret very interesting. Cant wait for more! Happy Holidays :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() Good chapter! Lots of detail, and I liked the story about why she's afraid of water. I'm glad they're finally making up. I can't wait for the next chapter! - RoseBriar |
![]() ![]() ![]() thank god Layton stopped being a dick. love the story! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Wow I swear I was holding my breath the entire time I read this chapter. haha it was awesome : ) |
![]() ![]() ![]() Ariel's secret is revealed! That's so sad and for a six year old to go through that must be just terrifying! Omg! Ariel and Layton are gonna do the hanky-panky in her classroom! Talk about kinky. Hehehehe |
![]() ![]() ![]() Wonderful, as usual. I can't wait for the next chapter! Happy Holidays! Eva |
![]() ![]() ![]() LOVE IT! I was totally scared that Princess was kidnapped before the reply. She's too fun to go through such a painful experiece. Can't wait till the next update. |
![]() ![]() ![]() omg... whats going to happen next? How could you leave such a cliff hanger? lol |
![]() ![]() ![]() Great chapter! Maybe Ariel will find it in her heart to forgive Layton. I can't wait to see what's going to happen next! I sure hope Princess is okay! Update again soon! - RoseBriar P.S. Sorry for the late review! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Story is getting good. Excited for more. Thanks. |
![]() ![]() ![]() It's really good! Although the lock down thing was a little obvious... Keep going! I can't wait for more :D |
![]() ![]() ![]() Oh! Adding some suspense to it now are we? Me likey :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() kind of forgot about the kidnappings but it's a good way to break up the layton ariel saga that they got going. |