Another fantastic chapter! Even though it was a filler. :P Eager to see what you have planned next! :)

Cydney

Well Done!

finally layton meet his challenge.. i doubt he will be able to win her heart so easily this time

Yes! Finally Layton has seen the LIGHT!woohoo

are you going to have Ariel and Brody in the next chapter (after they finished doing the hanky panky)

Brody seems kind of innocent. As for Layton, finally he's figuring it out.

I didn't see any typos this time around.

Awesome chapter. I've been dying to read more. anyway good job and keep up the good work. lol i can't wait to see how ariel reacts to laytons change of mind i hope she doesn't make things to easy for him.

Sleeping around is not the answer, but it's pretty funny to see them both try.

There were two typos:

"She began explaining the main points of the story that was composed entirely of poem."

And the very first word of the chapter. "Shewas" Presumably there's supposed to be a space in there.

This is really good! Can't wait to read some more

great story cant wait for the next chapter

Nice chapter. They're in the stage of DENIAL! Hahaha! Sucks for them! Update ASAP, or you know what happens... - RoseBriar

i guess both of them will be miserable until they sort out their feelings

I'm so glad you updated! As you already know, I enjoyed this chapter like I have all of the others!

I loved that you picked Shane West to play Layton. "A Walk To Remember" is one of my most favorite movies ever!

Keep these amazing chapters coming and I promise to review!

Cydney

Wow I love this story so much! I felt bad for Layton when he was talking to Ariel.

Can't wait for the next chapter!

uh oh Layton is definitely digging his own grave lol Anyway can't wait o see how far this Brody thing goes

I think its funny hoe they are both having sex with other people to get over each other