Reviews for Code Purple
yayawhynot89 chapter 1 . 7/25/2010
Absolutely in love with this so far, Can't wait to read more. Oh and I absolutely loved it how Layton got all jealous at the club :)
aby pwn u chapter 4 . 7/22/2010
Haha! I don't think there was anything wrong with the dream, it was done pretty good :) I basically have nothing else to say :P EXCEPT that I LOVE Princess , Shes awesome!
chng234 chapter 4 . 7/22/2010
i like princess.. she has a unique character... layton is too arrogant. someone need to tone him down
tifftiffannie chapter 4 . 7/22/2010
lol i liked this chapter and princess, i hope you had a great vacation. update again soon!
Cute Writer chapter 4 . 7/22/2010
OUTSTANDING AGAIN XD
Guest chapter 1 . 7/22/2010
this story makes twilight look like the most intricate, realistic plot in the universe.

are you sure ariel brooks isn't just a glorified version of yourself, author? those characters are the worst to read about.
brownchristine8 chapter 4 . 7/22/2010
Oh, please. Kinky sex requires much more foreplay. ;)
Stretch19 chapter 4 . 7/22/2010
it was a dream so the kink wasn't out of place or badly written, it's a dream they're supposed to be filled with dirty thoughts (mostly). i'm liking the introduction of his sister princess and how they're pretty similar, maybe working her way into his crowd? it was a good chapter overall. what's julie's role, apart from hating on ariel?
book-geek chapter 4 . 7/22/2010
I love this story! I think that the kink was good and showed a bit of a different side of Layton. I also don't think it was too early because they got interupted. I can't wait to see what Ariel does in school either!

Can't wait for more (:
Saadiyah chapter 3 . 7/20/2010
Oh goodness. .amazing!

I can't wait for the next chapter.
aby pwn u chapter 3 . 7/13/2010
Haha, U put ur name there twice at the end of the A/N and u spelled Author without the r :P O: I rlly AM a perfectionist :O LMAO Hehe (: I loved this chapter, FINALLY, after 3 chapters poor old Layton finally gets some action ;D
berrykiss chapter 3 . 7/13/2010
And I thought I was mean cutting off a chapter when the kissing was just getting good; I'm sorry, this is just cruel! I totally called this happening, but I'll be damned if it didn't still take me by surprise.

Can't wait for the next chapter; it's going to be so yummy!

;)

xoxo
tifftiffannie chapter 3 . 7/13/2010
baha, that was sexy ;D

good story can't wait for an update
teardropsONroses chapter 3 . 7/12/2010
wow

very hot

but why does she keep saying his full name? she's 22 and a teacher. they either say your first name, last name, or Mr. whoever
FLIPPER66 chapter 3 . 7/12/2010
THIS ONES VERY GOOD SO FAR

EH,, MAYBE SHE SHOULD MAKE HIM WAIT JUST ALITTLE LONGER JUST SO'S

HE DOESN'T GET THE IMPRESSION HE ALWAYS GETS WHAT HE WANTS ,WHEN HE THINKS HE SHOULD GET IT LOL.

I'M SURE SHE'S SMART ENOUGH TO COME UP WITH SOMETHING AT THE CRUCIAL MOMENT COMING UP SOON.
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