Reviews for Code Purple |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Absolutely in love with this so far, Can't wait to read more. Oh and I absolutely loved it how Layton got all jealous at the club :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() Haha! I don't think there was anything wrong with the dream, it was done pretty good :) I basically have nothing else to say :P EXCEPT that I LOVE Princess , Shes awesome! |
![]() ![]() ![]() i like princess.. she has a unique character... layton is too arrogant. someone need to tone him down |
![]() ![]() ![]() lol i liked this chapter and princess, i hope you had a great vacation. update again soon! |
![]() ![]() ![]() OUTSTANDING AGAIN XD |
![]() ![]() this story makes twilight look like the most intricate, realistic plot in the universe. are you sure ariel brooks isn't just a glorified version of yourself, author? those characters are the worst to read about. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Oh, please. Kinky sex requires much more foreplay. ;) |
![]() ![]() ![]() it was a dream so the kink wasn't out of place or badly written, it's a dream they're supposed to be filled with dirty thoughts (mostly). i'm liking the introduction of his sister princess and how they're pretty similar, maybe working her way into his crowd? it was a good chapter overall. what's julie's role, apart from hating on ariel? |
![]() ![]() ![]() I love this story! I think that the kink was good and showed a bit of a different side of Layton. I also don't think it was too early because they got interupted. I can't wait to see what Ariel does in school either! Can't wait for more (: |
![]() ![]() ![]() Oh goodness. .amazing! I can't wait for the next chapter. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Haha, U put ur name there twice at the end of the A/N and u spelled Author without the r :P O: I rlly AM a perfectionist :O LMAO Hehe (: I loved this chapter, FINALLY, after 3 chapters poor old Layton finally gets some action ;D |
![]() ![]() ![]() And I thought I was mean cutting off a chapter when the kissing was just getting good; I'm sorry, this is just cruel! I totally called this happening, but I'll be damned if it didn't still take me by surprise. Can't wait for the next chapter; it's going to be so yummy! ;) xoxo |
![]() ![]() ![]() baha, that was sexy ;D good story can't wait for an update |
![]() ![]() ![]() wow very hot but why does she keep saying his full name? she's 22 and a teacher. they either say your first name, last name, or Mr. whoever |
![]() ![]() THIS ONES VERY GOOD SO FAR EH,, MAYBE SHE SHOULD MAKE HIM WAIT JUST ALITTLE LONGER JUST SO'S HE DOESN'T GET THE IMPRESSION HE ALWAYS GETS WHAT HE WANTS ,WHEN HE THINKS HE SHOULD GET IT LOL. I'M SURE SHE'S SMART ENOUGH TO COME UP WITH SOMETHING AT THE CRUCIAL MOMENT COMING UP SOON. |