Reviews for Code Purple
live 2oo write chapter 2 . 7/8/2010
Can someone say...HOT! :)
brownchristine8 chapter 2 . 7/8/2010
If she didn't have to deal with this when she was in high school, what makes her think she'll be able to handle it now? She has no experience. I think she's in over her head.
book-geek chapter 2 . 7/8/2010
I really love this story! I think that the teacher/student idea works better here because Ariel is still very young.

I'm guessing that for her fear someone close to her drowned or she almost drowned herself?

Can't wait for more :)
chng234 chapter 2 . 7/8/2010
layton is too cocky. i hope ariel can bring his pride down. is ariel a virgin?
gfg chapter 2 . 7/8/2010
I just found this story. 2 chapters and I'm already hooked. Seriously. I think I'm in love with it.

But 10 days? I don't think I can survive long. Really.
Gator-aide chapter 1 . 7/8/2010
Loved it!

You make me laugh, and who would have known that you have such a great writing perspective? That's flattery. :)

can't wait for the next chapter!
ced chapter 1 . 7/8/2010
Well I definitely want to see more of this! Love it. :)
berrykiss chapter 1 . 7/2/2010
I LOVE it, I absolutely love it. Please don't stop now. Okay first of all Layton is such a typical jock, I love him! And Ariel can get away with the banter because she's so young. You are a genius!


DangerousFeamles chapter 1 . 7/1/2010
It's 4:21 in the morning and I'm in love with your story.
HeartLikePorcelain chapter 1 . 6/30/2010
i liked it but i also found it kind of eeh.

but please do continue]. very interesting idea.
Cute Writer chapter 1 . 6/30/2010
LOVE IT, LVE IT, 'Arent you afraid that you wouldnt compare to the countless MEN I had in my bed, BOY?' LOL Ariel and Layton will be so fun to watch as they grow together. I love your style, Ches and I so hope that you can review my story Wheelerella, give me some feedback PLZ N THXZ, CANT WAIT TO READ CHAPTER 1 OF CODE PURPLE, Maddie P.
aby pwn u chapter 1 . 6/30/2010
I LOVED it and I wanna read more D Its great!
Amanda chapter 1 . 6/30/2010
Oh I love it! Update soon please!
watergirl795 chapter 1 . 6/29/2010
It seemed pretty unrealistic...but I think it might just work. I'm anxious to see how the rest of it turns out. continue soon please! :)
brownchristine8 chapter 1 . 6/29/2010
Let's see how hard he has to work for it, shall we? ;)
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