Awesome is what I think of this book so far.

I love it!

I'm concerned for your mental well being. I read this story after not enjoying another story, Breaking Giselle, by you. In both stories the men treat the women like absolute sh_t and then expect to get away with it with an apology? And then they DO get away with it? Not only do the men get away with treating the women like sh_t after using them for sex (in a completely unsexy way both times) but then they apologize and get to have make-up sex in both stories at some point. That's a GREAT message for girls to have such low self respect. *eye roll* I love a story with a dominating man, but characters NEED to have respect for each other or else any attempt at sexiness is ruined. A misogynistic man is not sexy, especially when the girl is hurt in the process. Some girls use men too and in that case, a misogynistic male love (well, just sex) interest is fine, but when the girl puts in effort and emotion, the guy cannot treat her like sh_t and get away with it and get to have her again. Just no. This makes me feel sick to my stomach that people enjoy reading and writing this.

I just finished the first chapter and its awesome. I love it

Oh my god you really are stupid aren't you? What the other anonymous was implying was that you based the characters personality on your own. Personally I think you character is a Mary Sue but I got to admit you are a very good writer which is very hard to find these days on fan fiction/fiction sites.

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I absolutely adored this story the story line was intriguing and the twist in it was clever you've got some good talent and I can't wait to check out some of your other stories :) sorry I'm just reviewing I did read this like a few days ago but u got it now :)

Good story. Thanks

This story is adorable! I love the ending, I wanted to read more but of course all good things must come to an end. Thanks for the wonderful story, hope you keep writing for us readers sake. Thanks!

I've gotta say that this is my all time FAVORITE story! Even though he walks out on Ariel... But it is still freakin awesome! I love your stories! Please Publish a novel! I'm (mentally) on my knees begging here!

by the time i read that the medics were really the kidnappers, i skipped all those chapters and went here. sorry, i really got bored reading the action part. i just wanted a love story. otherwise, this was a great fic.

my god he is a BOY. what an idiot.

kiss and tell much? and erin should have prettied herself instead! the best revenge is to be beautiful. she should act like she doesn't care. really.

i kind of feel sorry for ariel.

is she going to do it? i fear for her.