nice first chapter.

I wasnt sure if this would have been a good book when i read the description, i thought it would be kind of unrealistic, but i actually kind of liked it. I do think that you should talk more about other people like Laytons friends all in all i dont regret reading it. :)

Please write a novel and get it published! I would read it and over again! You are truly inspiring!

Love that they do this during a code purple

I love what you write! Don't ever stop doing what you do! I can't wait to read other scandelous stories of yours. You have really inspired me!

I didnt know what to think when first started reading. But it turn out to interesting. Really enjoyed the fact that u let ur guard down.

Nice one!
Loved reading it. It is really good. I hope you put up the sequels soon.

I'm so glad I read this story, it was really well written and had a great storyline to it. :D If you ever need someone to beta your work, just to let you know that, I'm available! You're a fantastic writer, keep it up!

i just finish reading this story..i luv the plot coz it is different from the others n full of suspensions..

WOW THAT WAS AWESOME BUT WHAT SURPRISED ME THE MOST WAS BRODY XD

i rly enjoyed the story...

I loved this story you are a great writer

I really love this story. What about the character of Princess ? You spoke in chapter 10 of a future story where Princess will stars as the main character ;)

Nice one! I'm finally done reading ALL the CHAPTERS within 24 hours. I only had a limited hours of sleeping because of school works but I spent it by reading this fic while having a high fever. Isn't that great? LOL! :D I LOVE IT! Congratulations for this amazing fic. Great job! :D

I love Ariel and Layton. They're such a perfect couple. I'm glad that they ended up together. Even though, so many things happened, they manage to overcome all the obstacles and problems in their relationship.

I love Natalie. She's so adorable. :))

I love Princess too because she's awesome! :))

I like the parents of Layton and Princess, they're so supportive. :)))

I hate Brody to the fullest. what a bastard. I feel bad to Jessica and Hailey. They were raped and Jessica was killed. T_T

Anyways, Congratulations again and Until next time.! :))

This story is amazing! (I've read the whole thing, although this is a review of chapter one) I seriously think this could be published and made into a book. It is that bloody good.

Keep writing!

XOXOXO