Reviews for Code Purple
PixieLizzie-Aiko chapter 21 . 9/13/2011
Your story is absolutely amazing!D
bookADDICT6 chapter 21 . 7/25/2011
The ending was just perfect. There was no need for excess drama, just sweet moments. I have a feeling that Brody is making a comeback if there is a sequel. (I'm hoping there is, wink, wink.) Sad to see this story done though :'(
bookADDICT6 chapter 20 . 7/25/2011
The beginning was a bit weird and freaky. I just loved the ending though because it had such good closure. Ariel and Layton are just perfect for each other in so many ways :]
bookADDICT6 chapter 19 . 7/25/2011
This chapter went by really fast. First, it's trying to escape and then everyone's normal and back at school. Brody is just this sick, twisted guy who, like you mentioned before, stalked a six year-old. That is just so wrong and don't even start about the age difference.

I'm so happy that Ariel's pregnant with Layton's kid. Even though Brody couldn't have kids, it's still a possibility. I also liked knowing that he's nineteen instead of eighteen. It's just a year difference, but it seems less awkward.
bookADDICT6 chapter 17 . 7/25/2011
Like I said, these are sick people... It just gives me goosebumps thinking that some people can be this disgusting.
bookADDICT6 chapter 16 . 7/25/2011
How could there only be one paramedic there? Unless the police were part of the plot too, it seems so unlikely! I'm sad to say that there's only a few chapters left before this is done :(
bookADDICT6 chapter 15 . 7/25/2011
Still no reason why Brody is a kidnapper, and I have a feeling it's just because he's sick. Who would have thought that a sweet guy like him could turn out to be such a prick.
bookADDICT6 chapter 14 . 7/25/2011
I just knew somehow it was going to be Brody. The reason is why though. I have a feeling he heard Ariel's convo with Josie and did not like to be rebound guy. But that wouldn't explain why he's been kidnapping people...
bookADDICT6 chapter 12 . 7/25/2011
I had this feeling that almost drowning was the reason for her phobia agaisnt water, but I thought it would be a family member. Just a bit different, but it would make more sense for the person who has the phobia to experience it.
bookADDICT6 chapter 11 . 7/25/2011
Even though this chapter didn't start all lovey dovey, I like where it's going. This is really bad to say, but I like that there's a lockdown.
bookADDICT6 chapter 10 . 7/25/2011
I take back what I said about Ariel not going back to Layton. She still wants him, she's just better at not showing it. I totally love Layton now because he admitted that he wants (loves) Ariel.
bookADDICT6 chapter 9 . 7/25/2011
I'm sort of happy that Layton is the one thinking about Ariel instead of the other way around. Normally, it's the girl who wants the guy back. Cliché at times and they just make girls feel worse about themselves.
bookADDICT6 chapter 8 . 7/25/2011
I like how Ariel is moving on, but not with Brody. To me he doesn't seem serious. Just want to get some.

I wish Ariel and Layton went back to their normal behaviour in the first chapter. It was much more enjoyable.
bookADDICT6 chapter 5 . 7/25/2011
I feel like Ariel hurt Layton's feelings in the restaurant. Which makes Layton more likable, nothing better than sympathy.
bookADDICT6 chapter 3 . 7/25/2011
I can't see a teacher at a club, no matter how old or young they are. It's just awkward, but if we met Ariel before we knew her as a teacher it would have been different.
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