Reviews for Code Purple
bookADDICT6 chapter 2 . 7/25/2011
I always thought she wanted to skip some grades because she was smart. But, hearing how Ariel never experienced a normal teenage life seems unfair.
bookADDICT6 chapter 1 . 7/25/2011
That's certainly a different idea. Normally, I get bored of high school romance. Bu that's where all the action is. Same with young adults ;)
Ms.Imperfection chapter 21 . 7/21/2011
I adored this story it was great and I love it. I had planned to review earlier but got side tracked by the story
Ashley chapter 21 . 7/13/2011
I absolutely loved your story. It was really good and had a lot of different twists that made me want to keep on reading. :)
drats chapter 4 . 7/1/2011
loving the story! Except in this chapter, you really shouldnt include the whole speech by Ariel about thinking Layton wasn't going to dump her in the morning. Because the story implies that she already knows that, and alos because it makes her seem like a little too much like a teenager, also because she was dancing with Brody thinking about having casual sex and she can't just turn around and say she thought Layton was going to be more than casual sex. You getting me?

anyway, I love this!
teodark45 chapter 21 . 7/1/2011
I've been looking for a fic like this since I started reading them, you made my week!

There is only one little detail I couldn't get over , the fact that Ariel actually believed Broody(or what his name was, hated the guy)about not being able to have children when she told Layton about being pregnant, you could or should (in my opinion) leave only the part where she tells him she's pregnant with his (Layton's) because of the time, but that's just my personal view of the happening.
konichiwa2u chapter 21 . 6/26/2011
Finished! I love the story! Fantastic job!
outsidersgirl chapter 21 . 6/23/2011
this is good
chng234 chapter 21 . 6/22/2011
This is a nice ending. I m so happy for them
RoseBriar32192 chapter 21 . 6/22/2011
NOOOOOOOOOOO! IT'S OVER! WHY! Well, it was a good way to end it at least. I know you had a great time writing it and I had a great time reading it! I hope you make a sequel about their kids when they're older or something like that, it would make a good story. Anyway, thanks for making this last chapter so great. I can't wait to read what you write next! Until next time! - RoseBriar
witeaya chapter 21 . 6/22/2011

i like the story but there were a couple of stuff that made this story not that real or great.

i dont like how immature ariel's reactions to some of layton's actions. she didnt sound or act like a brilliant woman. instead most of the time when she had a face-off with layton alone or in public she acted so like a teenage girl. i understand she barely out of her teen but i dont see her so called intelligence being portrayed in the story.

thats the main things that bothers me while reading this.

also after 7 years is it possible to keep their relationship on the dl even from her closest colleague? if they stayed in the same town thats it.

im sorry if im harsh but u have potential and i hope my comments will help u some way or the other.

keep on writing!
Frozen Doll chapter 21 . 6/21/2011
I read ALL 21 chapters in one day. It was great there were a bunch of spelling mistakes, but that's fine, after reading the reasons why. All in all. Amazing sex. It aaa just what I was looking for.
bumbleB825 chapter 21 . 6/21/2011
cuuutttteee glad everything worked out:)
Aimilove chapter 1 . 6/21/2011
I love this story! And its only the prologue! lol I have a lot of free time at work and needed to find a good read that would keep me occupied. Thank you so much! Can't wait to read more.
Smartgirl94 chapter 21 . 6/21/2011
This was so good. I love it XD this is one of my favorites stories. Hope to hear from you soon with more sotries like this one :D
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