OMG! WHY THE CLIFF HANGER! NOOOOOOOO! Good chapter though, YOU MUST UPDATE ASAP! - RoseBriar

Layton is awesome, now I can say that without doubting it. Even if it was funny to know that he was scared. Princess is just so funny. I think these two are heroes. Hope that nothing will happen to them.

Update soon :D

oooooh! you updated! Now I'm sitting on pins and needles waiting for the next chapter! Please update soon :D:D

I can't wait, cliffies REALLY annoy me :D:D

Eva

Oh. My. God! Why do you keep doing this? We get a new chapter and it's like yesss I'll finally know what happens! And then you give another cliff hanger! Not fair :(

This was a really gret chapter, I loved the way Ariel didn't want to believe he was there, it was really cute :)

I really hope that Princess is ok! :(

Can't wait for more!3

:O UR KILLING ME WITH SUSPENSE HERE! Wow, I thought this was just going 2 be a teacher and student thing but WOW, all i kept thinking was "they should turn this into a movie!" It really is great! It seems so realisitic! Even though it's sad, Jessica DOES die and it makes it all the more better! No, im not a sadist :P Princes ROCKS! And as much as I may want you to update fast, I'm not going to ask you to or expect it since good writing takes time _ Great job!

I hate you sooo much lol.. wow what a cliff hanger.. Its exciting, so sad tha jessica died, This broody is suck a psycho

I hope you update soon.. greaaat chapter )

i hope layton will save ariel soon

Good chapter! I REALLY hope where Layton is headed is the right place! I'm also glad he realized what had happened! Hurry up and write the next chapter! - RoseBriar

I was starting to get worried! You hadn't updated in a while, but you're back, so all is well. I can't wait for the next chapter, and I hope that this long weekend means another update for us :D:D

Great job,

Eva

how many chapters left?

Yay, thanks for updating. I have to say Layton was very smart to figure out that something is wrong with Ariel. He's also very smart in trying to track her down. I can't believe the story turn out to e dealing with stalkers. But, it's certainly interesting. I do hope you update soon. Brody is such an a**. Rape is not sexy. Consent is sexy. (I read that somewhere and I do agree with that statement.) I do like Ariel for continuing to fight on.

aww it was so short! i need more! haha

i love this story so much, it always holds my attention. i really really hope that Layton is in the right spot! *fingers crossed*

cant wait for more!

OMG! You can't end it like that!

I might have to resort to drastic measures until you upload the next chapter! (I have no idea what those measures are, but I'm brainstorming!)

Great job!

xoxo

Eva

I seriously like this. Upload soon!

OH My GOD! That was such an intense chapter! I was completely sucked into it.

I can't believe that Brody was able to get an ambulance! How did he do that? Why didn't anyone notice it? What does he want with Ariel?

The story is so AWESOME! I started last night at about 10 and could stop reading. Please update a.s.a.p (well... friday :P)

Lili and RayRay ~.~