|Reviews for Kings and Pawns|
| Ani Damascus chapter 20 . 5/28/2013
I Loooooove this so far and can't wait to see if she ends up with Paul or Edward... I kinda hope it'll be Edward, but only cause Paul was sort of cheating.
| Diana chapter 20 . 5/28/2013
Alright, you have to have her marry Edward now! - I mean, it's utterly inevitable!
| lulu chapter 1 . 5/22/2013
ooh my goood! i've i'm so glad i've found this story! i've always loved the idea of lady jane and edward getting married (even though they're cousins...) so i hope to see lots more of her even if her and edward dont have a romance :) one things bugging me though, elizabeth was certainly not pretty in real life, even though here you describe her as beautiful. still, i love this story sooo much already and i've only read one chapter so thanks!
| AlysonSerenaStone chapter 20 . 5/24/2013
I really liked this update! Great job!
| Elaine Danievle chapter 19 . 5/9/2013
Weee, I freakin' hope she relents and marries Edward. I mean, she'll be queen! :D Anyways, keep up the good work ;)
| AlysonSerenaStone chapter 19 . 5/8/2013
The story line is really picking up here. I can't wait to see what happens!
| Nora chapter 18 . 5/1/2013
Marvellous! I expect you to update soon ;)
| AlysonSerenaStone chapter 9 . 5/1/2013
Nice work. Just a few little typos here and there, but nothing to really worry about.
| AlysonSerenaStone chapter 2 . 4/25/2013
This is really good as far.
| Tricorvus chapter 18 . 4/23/2013
damn, you do a good job with this. You have the language, it's like watching the Tudors, damn near.
Very good intrigue and back biting. If I had lived in those times, I would not have wanted to live at Court.
| Tricorvus chapter 16 . 3/22/2013
Poor girl, yes it's possible for a human to love, or to feel what they think is love, for two different people. Well-written.
| Tricorvus chapter 15 . 3/22/2013
oh dang, is that the direction it's going? I'd hoped to see Queen Margaret Tudor...
Well, only one more chapter, then whatever you write after that. I will read it and see how it comes out, no matter who you walk her down the aisle with. At least if Margaret marries Paul, show us who Eddie marries...
| Tricorvus chapter 14 . 3/22/2013
...were LED out. I know your spell check missed it because lead the metal is spelled that way. There are several instances of that . Be careful. Also "were you frightened". We're is of course we-are.
Just reading this chapter kind of made me sympathise with what relatives of the great had to put up with. Gut-wrenching...
My god that girl is an idiot. The King wants you, marry him, you git!
| Tricorvus chapter 12 . 3/22/2013
Huh? I would never have seen that it was Elizabeth's doing! I rather thought it was a Mary supporter... Maybe I missed something...
Still and all, damn well written :D
| Tricorvus chapter 11 . 3/22/2013
Holy snozzberries! You know how to write a cliff-hanger that makes me want to cry with frustration. That I spend time letting you know how good this is, while the next chapter sits there awaiting me... I can hardly stand it. [Buck up girl, tell the nice writer how good it is, then RUN] :P