Reviews for Kings and Pawns
Tricorvus chapter 10 . 3/22/2013
i will LOSE all I... mind your loose/lose.
Also, although I enjoy these historical romances, remember not to inflict our own century's morals and reactions into it. A girl back then might be miserable, but rarely did a girl try to talk her father/brother out of a match or commit suicide - as examples. Yes, she'd whine to her friends about her misery, but no one would take steps to change anything. Just something to keep in mind.
That said, you have captured well the confusion that had to reign in the minds of the people, as Edward was an unknown factor. He could swing any way, and surprise people. I have no doubt, that, had he lived, he would have continued to baffle his observers. He IS known for his prudery and lecturing Elizabeth on her behavior...
Tricorvus chapter 9 . 3/22/2013
who is that weirdo that said that? I guess we'll find out...
Rock on!
Tricorvus chapter 8 . 3/22/2013
Poor girl, but in that time, your heart could wander where it wished, but your body went where your betters sent it...
Tricorvus chapter 7 . 3/22/2013
You are easily as good as Phillippa Gregory. Your story rings true to what is known of the period and to the speech used. You clearly paid attention to your history classes and I suspect, like myself, you did some extra-curricular reading on the era. It IS a fascinating era, and I am far from the first person to wonder, what would have happened if little Eddie had lived. I want you to know that I laid down "The Constant Princess" to read this. And thus far I have not been disappointed.
Lyla chapter 13 . 3/19/2013
Bravo! I'm eating every chapter up.
Lyla chapter 10 . 3/19/2013
That last little bit broke my heart! I really do love this story.
Lyla chapter 7 . 3/19/2013
My my this Paul is a charmer. Hmmm... as well as a bit of a smartass lol but I do like where this is going!
Mgorm chapter 16 . 3/14/2013
I'm always so excited to get the e-mails of a new chapter for this story! Your writing is great and the story is wonderful! Please don't stop writing this!
Guest chapter 3 . 3/13/2013
just ... so much... Court with little Eddie alive! No burnings! So much love for this...
Rock on!
Lyla chapter 1 . 3/11/2013
Fantastic idea and the first chapter's promising (if not a little rushed) I'm exctied to read more.
Guest chapter 15 . 2/12/2013
Love this! Please update soon!
Guest chapter 14 . 11/26/2012
CONTINUEEEEEE! Please? :)
Guest chapter 1 . 11/19/2012
When does the rest come? :)
Guest chapter 1 . 11/4/2012
I really, really, really hope that she'll end up with Edward. But that's really up to you. Anyways, great storyy!
Guest chapter 1 . 11/4/2012
Please finish the story. I'm DYING to know what'll happen. And I agree. It's a good way to introduce the time of the reign Edward VI. There's not many stories about him, so this is quite refreshing and new.
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