Reviews for An Orchestra Plays in my Backyard
Kristina Suko chapter 1 . 7/1/2010
I love it! You are my standard for poetry submissions. :D
KittenOnTheKeys chapter 1 . 6/29/2010
I really love this imagery! I also think your use of rhythm and rhyme are clever. Especially with rhyme, it can be so easy to fall into cliche, but you never do it. You can see/hear all of this in your head and it's really magnificent.
Thetis of White Isle chapter 1 . 6/29/2010
This is really lovely and clever. And you somehow managed to incorporate the repetition without it getting trite! Good stuff.

Can't really think of anything bad to say at the moment. It flows well, and it works.
Misty J. Snydiel chapter 1 . 6/29/2010
This poem is very lovely. I enjoyed reading it very much and look forward to tomorrow afternoon so I may listen to my own backyard orchestra. :-)