Aw, this is so sweet! I love this story! :D :D :D :D

i loved this... especially the end being just like the beginning... gave the whole story this nice little emphatic finish:) write more soon:3

yayayayay loved this

So cute!

This was so cute. I just wish there was more interaction after the become a couple.

Well, you warned me that they swore. Yeah, I mostly ignored it.

But this was really sweet, I've got to say. :) Yes, it was a bit of a long one shot, but I think I liked it a lot. You know, aside from the cussing, but it's really hard to avoid that when you want this realistic, like you said.

I love how the parents are so oblivious. :) It's hilarious.

That was amazing ;D

i like your story. so simple and cute. i hope you write the running story

Aww that was cute. I liked it. ]

Hey,

This story is soo cute!I think the plot was well thought out.

Just wanted to let you know, I think there's a typo where it says "Probably a bad idea, however, because Fayah will fight for her man no matter what."

~SM

Aw! This was so cute. I think you portrayed their emotions very well. Great job. One spelling mistake that stuck out to me is that at one point you called 'Farah', the girlfriend Fayah. That's it. CC? Hm, maybe we could've seen more conversations between Sarah and Joshua, but I still like it how it is. Really good!

Ooh. -cough- Okay then. My eyes widened at the laungage occasionally, but...it works. You know? It's not one of those stories when the laungage is just useless and there's no point to it. This works.

Um...I sort of lost track of all the spelling/grammar stuff...it wasn't that bad, though. But at the beginning, when she's combing her "tangled hair" you used that phrase twice in a row.

Hmm...yeah, I liked it. I don't know. I mean...it was well-written, if a little fast paced, and a few wording choices I would have changed. It's just a TAD cliche- I mean, the window part. The idea isn't that well used, but the watching in the window is, just a little bit. :D It worked, though, so that's my biggest problem with it.

Yeah...that's all. Short review. :) BYE!

~FlyingThroughDreams