So, I just read all of this book and it’s prequel in the last four days. I tot hooked on the story and found the characters to be quite interesting and not as flat as many characters turn out to be in other stories I have read. I realize that I am very late to be reviewing this because you have probably moved on to other projects, but I wanted to give my opinion on the story anyway. Basically what I thought was that it was just the right amount of repetitive to make sure important things were remembered for later. I thouroghly enjoyed reading these books and appreciate all the effort you put into writing them. However, I hated that Callen became th new Kara in the second story, Callen hated how Kara had treated her when she was the newest addition to the band’s family so it doesn’t make sense to me why she would do all the same things that Kara had done to Savannah. I loved seeing a lot more of Maddox in the second book and am happy that you tried the multiple perspectives narration, I think it added a lot to the story. I don’t think the story resolved completely however, I feel like it was very close, but not quite there and that irks me. I also found it entertaining that used the word “explode” in reference to both orgasms and anger. Similarly, you spelling of “Geezus” instead of “Jesus” was quite funny.

I wish you would update and compete this story

update a new chapter!

The feels cannot handle what is going down. Can't wait until the next update; hopefully soon!

I really wish you would add some more to this story. It's been so long!

Fantastic Story! The characters are well written. It feels like they could just jump off the page and come to life. I really liked Callen in the previous story, but she doesn't seem to have matured much over time. I would love to see her make things right with Mad and be able to have a good relationship with him. Nate seems to be the only one she really listens to, so maybe he will talk to Callen and open her eyes to the how childish she is acting. Hopefully becoming a mom will help her grow up a lot. I can't wait to see how she and Nate are as new parents and how Nate handles the birth of the baby. I am hoping for a little drama around that situation. :)

I love this story esp when maddie realised dat callen is a manipulative self centred bitch,doesnt she want maddie to be hapy she just all d guys attention to be on her only even wen shes in luv with nate only dat is seifishness,i dont think its pregnancy hormone cus she was like dat b4 she became pregnant,i like Nora and Josh update soon

I enjoyed this chapter and look forward to reading more soon. I'm almost caught up yay! Until next time.

Jackson is a douche but Maddox handled him so take that Jackson. What's up with Jenn she seems to have a few secrets? I enjoyed this chapter and I look forward to reading more soon. Until next time.

Nora has really grown on me. She loves and protects these guys especially her family. I like her although she can get evil which I like as well. I enjoyed this chapter and look forward to reading more soon. Until next time.

I loved that Nate showed he had some balls after all and stayed for dinner although he will pay for that later lol. I'm glad Maddie is happy and starting to recognize he should and can be happy I agree with Nate. I enjoyed this chapter and look forward to reading more soon like in a couple of minutes lol. Until next time.

I love that Maddie finally told Callen off she effing deserved it just saying. I can't wait to see what happens next. I apologize for taken so long to read this update but the good thing is I can read and review the next chapters yay! Until next time.

Gah. I felt that this chapter was shitty. Or maybe that is just me. I just couldn't wait to finish what I actually thought was the end of this story. Clearly, I was in denial. I hope this isn't the calm before the storm (an extremely shit chapter that will make me drop this story). I hope this is the hurricane before a rainbow. I am really hoping that this story will get better. I know you are a good author. Some of chapters are evidence of that. I just think that you are going through a rough time and are having trouble expressing yourself. Good luck. Hope things work out :)

You story really is getting draggy. I was almost at the point of dropping it but I kept telling myself that there are only 39 chapters. Seems like I was wrong.

I agree with Nora. Callen is going to be the end of the band. I REALLY hope she mends her ways cos I don't want the band to break up. I don't want anyone to leave. What was that comment Josh made about Yoko? I didn't understand it.