|Reviews for Clichés|
| annayh44 chapter 1 . 10/22
I never like the concept friends with benefit ewwww but there must be love betw them which they finally saw it :) Happy Married life Noah & Katie :D
| Ty Cavanaugh chapter 1 . 2/7/2013
I love it! Really funny ;)
| Dancing In A Flowerfield chapter 1 . 5/26/2012
I loved this story! It was adorable and really sweet. I loved the whole Ring Pop thing, too.
| checkyesdana chapter 1 . 11/2/2010
so so so cute. i would have liked some more detailed moments between Katie & Noah but otherwise so adorable
| thefaultinourpatronus chapter 1 . 9/23/2010
I FREAKING LOVE THIS!
That's all i have to say- merci.
| xxx chapter 1 . 7/25/2010
This was really good, like the idea, and how what Noah says when they're little actually comes true- "I promise I'll marry you for real one day. Just hit me really hard if I ever forget, okay?"
Love the end as well - "Katie," he said, "let's visit your grandma." It's a cute little inside thing- the shop assistant wouldn't have a clue what he was going on about :P
I think it'd be really cool if you did a companion piece from his POV, because while the story makes sense, Katie obviously doesn't have a clue what's going through Noah's head, and neither do we; It'd be interesting to see what he's thinking before he has his big revelation
| ghurl00 chapter 1 . 7/18/2010
The way he proposed was very original. Me
| Vi14 chapter 1 . 7/16/2010
Aw. I liked it a lot. The heat made me laugh and I liked the ending.
| CassandraRose526 chapter 1 . 7/10/2010
Cute story. I love the idea of going fake-ring-shopping with a friend, only to have said friend propose. Thanks for sharing!
| xoxluurve chapter 1 . 7/2/2010
WHAT? I am so confused. ;_; :3 We need an explanation! Seriously, I don't understand what just happened at the end there. But I liked the chemistry between the two characters! It was very engaging. Noah is just confusing. UGH, I really need to know what the hell he thought of. And what the hell she was thinking about when she told him that he should remember or something. Gah.
| Emedea chapter 1 . 6/30/2010
I love the last line! It was a perfect way for Noah to propose. The references to the shows were really cute too!
The only thing I'm not too crazy about it is the frequent mention of her life being a cliche. I mean, I get that it's pretty much the main focal point of the story, but I just have this pet peeve when characters' lives are cliches and they go around saying that their lives are cliches to make it seem less like a cliche (But I think you're actually trying to emphasize how much of a cliche Katie's life is). Some parts of the story where Katie talks about cliches, like the very beginning is good, but in this line: "It's probably really obvious – and definitely a cliché – that I have a crush on him." I think the mention of the cliche is unnecessary because most people are familiar with cliches, so we already know that Katie's crush on her best friend is a cliche.
Yeah, sorry for being all nit-picky. Great story!
| asianinvasion0530 chapter 1 . 6/30/2010
Haha I really liked it! Totally not like the typical best friend cliche, and you responded to the prompt well! ]
| annoyance chapter 1 . 6/30/2010
I loved the Psych and Castle references :) Nice job!
You can find this story added to the contest c2. Good luck!
| SunsetRainbow chapter 1 . 6/30/2010
I really liked it
until it abruptly ended and I was left disappointed D:
| mooniemex chapter 1 . 6/29/2010
oh my god i absolutley love thai it is amazing