Please make ant or chappy and make Raphael kiss Sara already. :-)
Can I have a cupcake.
I also put this story as a favorite so please hurry with The next chappy.

Please make the next chapter

:( when Is the next chapter?

This was great, I love the conflicted feelings between Sara and Raphael. I hope we find out what happened to her mom and Art! I'm going to cry if they aren't all right! Please update soon love!

This was great. The plot thickens! :] Keep it up!

Those better be virtual brownies! lol. Anyways, thanks for the update! Hope you update soon! Loved the chapter. I can't believe she is falling for Rapheal! I want to know Rapheal's POV! Is there a chance we can read it?

Good chapter... I'm forcing myself not to ramble. I don't have enough time...

Update soon please :)

Oh and by the way.

STILL TEAM RAPHAEL!

YAY.

LOL, This chapter is so cute :) YAY! I LOVE TITUS :) HE AND EMILY ARE SO CUTE :) AND CUTE LITTLE NOAH ;) TOO BAD HE RUINED THE KISSING PART XD BUT I LOVE HIM ANYWAY. RAPHAEL IS SO AWESOME BUT SO SHY I LOVE IT. XD SHY BOYS ARE HOT. :) GOOD CHAPTER.

YAY NOAH IS SAFE, AND SO IS TITUS! AND DON'T TELL ME D; WHEN ARE THEY GOING TO KIS? TEAM EDWARD .-. LOL I LOVED THE TWILIGHT REFERENCE :D OHMYGOSH I WANT TO KNOW WHAT HAPPENS... BUT I HATE IT WHEN I KNOW XD GOOD CHAP.

This story has grown so well, I love how its flowing and twisting at the same time. I can't wait for more, love!

When saw the reference to Twilight I was about ready to jump ship. There are so many stories that copy off of Twilight its repetitive. I'm happy you wont be. The story is coming along great. I think the vampires were a good twist though. I hope to read more. :)

I must say, this is a great story. I do hope her dogs are all right. I love all the characters, Sara seems well developed and Raphael seems perfect for her. Hopefully those Vampires are awesome too. Update!

By the way.

TEAM RAPHAEL ALL THE WAY!

that is all. thank you and goodbye.

I likey, I likey.

This is, i'm not going to lie, one of the most well - written books on fp. Just so you know.

Update.

Now.

Pretty please?

Which reminds me. Harry Potter and the sorceres stone?

I'm pretty sure it's the philosipher's stone.

Or is that just in England.?

Is it the sorcrer's stone in America?

Do they even have harry potter in america?

Who knows?

Actually, more to the point, who cares?

HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA. I've now taken up a load of space in your reviews. because i've rambled on a lot. I do ramble on a lot. It's a general fact. People always tell me off about it. Because I always speak in a really fast voice...

Okay, i'm shutting up now.

Please update soon.

Okay, i'm shutting.

Bye.

Thank you for reading this review.

Half of it is just my rambling...

I'm sorry about that.

Okay. Bye :)

Aw, Rapheal is so freaking cute. Thanks for updating. I think that Sara should meet some vampire dude so Rapheal would get jealous and all possesive on her. hehehe. Anyways, can't wait until your next update! I'll be here waiting. lol!