Reviews for Without Light
TheHeartBreakKid1324 chapter 8 . 6/23/2011
I love how Heather isn't afraid to speak up no matter what :)
CaBlasch87 chapter 24 . 6/23/2011
i actually kind of wanted to cry when i read this..its got so many emotions. as always i love your writing :)
TheHeartBreakKid1324 chapter 7 . 6/23/2011
If only we had shoes like that for real! :D

The imagery in this chapter is really good
TheHeartBreakKid1324 chapter 6 . 6/23/2011
This chapter was great! A little confusing, but definitely able to keep up with what's going on.:)
TheHeartBreakKid1324 chapter 5 . 6/23/2011
Did you come up with Lightning Leopards? If so that's very creative! I love Lucas' personality, he seems like such a great character to be around!
TheHeartBreakKid1324 chapter 5 . 6/23/2011
I'm really glad Heather is going to help her dad despite the fact that she isn't really well..his biggest fan. She's such a great person :)
TheHeartBreakKid1324 chapter 5 . 6/23/2011
I really hope "Now we only need to keep her in the dark" isn't what I think it means! Good point to stop the chapter :)
TheHeartBreakKid1324 chapter 5 . 6/23/2011
Akiraka is such a perfect name! I love it!
TheHeartBreakKid1324 chapter 5 . 6/23/2011
When you say "hints at homosexual attraction" are you talking about the way Lucas is attracted to Chris? Because at the beginning I thought Akiraka and Lucas were together since Lucas said "'That's not the only reason he wants us dead, Aki and I are-'"

So I assumed he meant they were together. And also, I like how you put that in there, I'm so sick of people saying that it's gross or disgusting or wrong. So yeah. :)
TheHeartBreakKid1324 chapter 4 . 6/23/2011
I like how Snake not only is able to transform into other people (or other creatures) but he also really likes doing it
TheHeartBreakKid1324 chapter 4 . 6/23/2011
I'm definitely rooting for the wolves! They seem like the good guys :)
TheHeartBreakKid1324 chapter 4 . 6/23/2011
I REALLY like where you're going with this! Everything is new and interesting.
TheHeartBreakKid1324 chapter 3 . 6/23/2011
How did she forget about Christian after he first dissapeared?
TheHeartBreakKid1324 chapter 3 . 6/23/2011
This book is really refreshingly unpredictable. Not many are like that anymore. Good job :)
TheHeartBreakKid1324 chapter 3 . 6/23/2011
Hope to read about the other Shirens, they're interesting!
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