Reviews for Without Light
TheHeartBreakKid1324 chapter 3 . 6/23/2011
Is this sea serpent able to be on land for long?
TheHeartBreakKid1324 chapter 2 . 6/23/2011
It's really good how you make each chapter end in a suspenseful way, that way no one can stop reading. :D
TheHeartBreakKid1324 chapter 2 . 6/23/2011
I think Chris and Heather will make a really good couple if that does happen :)
TheHeartBreakKid1324 chapter 2 . 6/23/2011
It's great how you kind of showed where the title comes from.

A book inside a book. Creative :)
TheHeartBreakKid1324 chapter 2 . 6/23/2011
I like how you tell what happened to the father, I was really wondering about that!
TheHeartBreakKid1324 chapter 1 . 6/23/2011
You made a good choice by making it almost go straight into action. It makes you not want to stop reading :)
TheHeartBreakKid1324 chapter 1 . 6/23/2011
You have a very unique story plot, I can tell already. Heather's character is perfect for a main character.
TheHeartBreakKid1324 chapter 1 . 6/23/2011
You use such colorful and great words. It really creates an image!
TheHeartBreakKid1324 chapter 1 . 6/23/2011
I just read chapter one and I'm already hooked! This is amazing :)
Xmidnight.queenX chapter 13 . 6/23/2011
i am so utterly and totally confused and i love it!

i dont understand who the journal is from i guess it would be marcus which is heathers dad and i think the ruby weapon is kintra and why was kintra born differently? and did kuro and marcus have a thing/ what the hell is going on? lol
Xmidnight.queenX chapter 12 . 6/23/2011
wait wtf? he isnt dragon? whoa wait is he heathers dad? what the hell is going on here?

i loved the bath scene with heather and her master it was totally cute and they soo have a thing for eachother and i especially loved the end

""Nervous?"

"Could be worse," she muttered, "you coulda took your pants off…"

"I can't," he jokingly whispered, "other people aren't supposed to see me naked.""

so funny how he threw her words at her hahahahah

i should probably go to sleep im so tired but i cant stop reading XD that is how good your story is ]
Xmidnight.queenX chapter 11 . 6/23/2011
so maybe the right brother did get her? i mean he has 30 moons to prove to he could take care of a pet and i think that is enough for them to fall in love! yay! and chris is sooo into estelle like he needs to get his hormones incheck hahah
Xmidnight.queenX chapter 10 . 6/23/2011
damn it! i think the wrong prince got heather right? grrrrrr so who was the one that bought estelle and chris aka aya?

and man estelle is really brainwashed shesh
Rukis Lakeru chapter 11 . 6/22/2011
Ok, I just simply love you! I have read it 'til here so far due to homework and other duties, but Always has this story on my mind 8D

Anyway, when I read until chapter four I though it was me who was imagining Yaoi/shlash shipping, but then reached the next chapter and I was like "OMG! Slash comming *_* " I'm really glad to see this kind of malexmale things on love-stories, even though they're not the mainly couples.

Kintra and Kuro are just too lovely in their own way *_* Kuro can be so childish, and I think that's pretty cute of him . And Kintra, oh god! I just love that type of characters 8D

Anyway, This is a little late review, since I had to read this one chapter on my free time xD, But tomorrow I'll keep going :D

This is a wonderful story, keep going like that ;D
Xmidnight.queenX chapter 9 . 6/22/2011
i cant help but feel a little sad for chris now that he is a pet because pets are just pets like they have no voice no opinion no birthday for goodness sake! its like they are just there [ and i like this chpt that was in chris's pov
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