|Reviews for Without Light|
| mylittleprincess chapter 13 . 9/28/2012
| Glory and Gore chapter 13 . 9/28/2012
He's able to accept change within himself. That to me is what makes him a exciting read.
| LuxAurorae chapter 1 . 9/27/2012
That is entirely too awesome. To be published! Oh, how I wish I was with you through the whole ride. I am totally amazed by you. Will be reading this again and leaving a real review
Missed you! :)
| camelgoo chapter 13 . 9/27/2012
omigod i love your story so much but i'm honestly worried that someone is going to plagiarize this story you should take it off fictionpress and put it on Wattpad- they don't have the copy-paste feature thingy... your choice though! this is totally professional! you should try to get it published once ur done and edited it and stuff :D
| mylittleprincess chapter 12 . 9/27/2012
awesome! update more please.
| DorkExpress chapter 12 . 9/23/2012
Kintra is the RUBY!
I wanna see Heather and Kuro flirt more!
| hazelcc chapter 12 . 9/9/2012
Oh my goodness. Its going to be torture waiting for the next chapter!
| Glory and Gore chapter 10 . 9/8/2012
I apologize deeply for not being able to review as often as I would love to. I've been so freakin' busy prepping spring semster for college, gettin' a job (which is startin' to look damn near impossible), and still not having any internet acess. My head is just spinning. I'm behind on every story plus new. Deep, deep sigh on my part.
I skipped most of Christian's POV. Not due to writing but I don't like him as a character. To me he's just a bore. And the bold font to signify Meren speaking to Heather was irritating. Just doing italic would have been better. Other than that I was a happy camper.
xoxo - Dia
| Alaeryel chapter 12 . 8/27/2012
Ok -I HAVE DIED AND GONE TO HEAVEN AGAIN Crysta-this was a BEAUTIFUL AND EXCEPTIONAL CHAPTER! You are a SHINING BRILLIANCE TO MY HEART AND MY IMAGINATION my GIRL! PURE PERFECTION AND EXCELLENCE HERE! DAMN I am now ENRAPTURED AND CAUGHT IN YOUR WRITING AND THIS STORY MY FRIEND-YOU SUPERIOR WRITING ENTHRALLS AND CAPTIVATES ME!
| ryanrene97 chapter 12 . 8/26/2012
This is my chapter 11 review. I thought the little moment with Kintra and Chris "aya" was adorable. I can't wait for the next chapter!
| Alaeryel chapter 11 . 8/25/2012
AGAIN ABSOLUTELY BRILLIANT HERE Crystalynn! This story is PURE PERFECTION for me! I love your writing style and MOST IMPORTANT-YOUR IMAGINATION IS OUT OF THIS WORLD! I can hardly wait for more of this story!
| Alaeryel chapter 8 . 8/25/2012
I AM REALLY LOVING this story Crystalynn! You have such an AMAZING ABILITY to write stories that captivate and transport them to your created world! ABSOLUTELY BRILLIANT!
| Alaeryel chapter 4 . 8/24/2012
OMG BEAUTIFUL! AMAZING WRITER !
| Alaeryel chapter 3 . 8/24/2012
BEAUTIFUL AND VERY WELL WRITTEN-I FELT her CONFUSION and everything! Great story Crystalynn.
| TotallyA chapter 11 . 8/20/2012
I love your story so far. It's so complex though, she's obviously special and different for some reason but you won't tell us why. Or even hint at it really. Then you haven't talked much about the dragon, I think it was in her book Without Light. I obviously like Heather the best at this point, she's the main character after all. Keep up the great work!