Reviews for The Girl Under the Waterfall
willcate chapter 23 . 12/20/2010
even if it is rushed, it's still good! I've followed the story the entire way. I like it. :). You can give thanks to Rentboheme for sending me here. ;) He told me about your story.
Bulletproof-jems chapter 22 . 12/20/2010
Viol8 chapter 22 . 12/3/2010
Ah! Josie no! [ Eh... why does she have to be captured? X[ Well, the story gets even more interesting! D Update soon!
KieranKonoha chapter 6 . 11/8/2010
Hey, I wanted to agree with you on the fact that your friend is a great writer, time is not given is an adorable story. Hm, this one seems a little suspisous, as in, I really can't tell what's going to happen, but why did you write in the summary that she was a mermaid? It kinda gave it away. Anyways... _ (Ah, reading this is disconcerting, someone saying my name so much is confusing, lol)
CedesPonyo chapter 22 . 11/6/2010
When is the next chapter coming up ? I really love this story and you are a great author .
234235134 chapter 22 . 11/2/2010
Oh, good luck with NaNoWriMo! I'm sure you'll have time to finish The Girl Under the Waterfall. Everyone loves it so much :) I'm interested on what Josie wants and why she wants to speak with a scientist. It's definitely connected with her apology to Jesse.
Nytlover chapter 22 . 10/31/2010
Update asap yeaah? This story is awesome!
Nano724 chapter 22 . 10/31/2010
Awesome chapter! I hope nothing happens to Josie D:

Good luck on NaNoWriMo! I wrote probably 10,0 words last year, so hopefully this year will be more successful. I almost forgot about it!

GermanSam chapter 22 . 10/31/2010
Good luck with NaNo and I do hope you find time to finish this story. I enjoy it so much and I'm interested to see if the scientist can help Josie get legs possibly or live out of water at least. Happy Halloween!
234235134 chapter 21 . 10/28/2010
By November! :O So soon. I have no idea what's going to happen next, it makes me feel scared. Hmm, I wonder how their problem's gonna be solved. Now that Alex is in this chapter, I thought about Alex and Josie meeting. They'll get along since they're both cheerful and stuff :D It's cute. You're officially awesome for updating faster than other authors I know.
irisherin1488 chapter 21 . 10/24/2010
I loved that chapter it was so cute! Update soon! And I hope you reach your goal of finshing the story before November. Love the story! Update soon! etc, etc. -Erin
Raised with Fangs chapter 21 . 10/23/2010
i love this! i wonder how your going to solve this problem...
GermanSam chapter 21 . 10/23/2010
Aw how adorable! Jessie and Josie FTW! I'm really rooting for them to work out!
Nano724 chapter 21 . 10/23/2010

RentBoheme chapter 18 . 10/23/2010
It's been a little while since I read any of this, but this was a good chapter. I think it's good that Billy and Jesse don't keep the fact that mermaids were discovered from Josie. It's important that she know. I just hope that nothing happens to her! (Actually, I kind of do, because that would add a new element of excitement to the story! :P)


"And we don't know it that's going to be safe for them." - "It" should be "if."

"I know you want to don't want her to worry" - This makes no sense.

"Once the words feel from my lips" - "Fell" instead of "feel".

"I should haven't acted to plaintive" - "To" should be "so."
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