|Reviews for Kerfuffle|
| person is gone chapter 1 . 7/15/2010
The way you wrote this made me feel like a close friend and we're just sitting out on the patio talking, and you get lost in your memories and start nostalgic recitings. This makes it easy to read, and - best of all - FUN, like the family you're trying to describe. I enjoyed that :) I also liked how each family member gets their own paragraph... the mother in particular is described well.
"I am happy to report that both Wesley and Stephen have passed the kerfuffle test." Nice ending!
The only thing I feel this is lacking is a part for the author - where does she (he?) fit into this family? It's like a family portrait with one face missing.
| scharlie18 chapter 1 . 7/7/2010
This is cute. Reminds me of my family, only I'm the oldest of six, not eight.
The only thing that I would say is that you forgot one person - yourself! Even if you just say something short (like, something about how you're the person who sits down and writes essays about your chaotic family), I think you deserve a mention.