Reviews for Running Water
Brix Herrera chapter 1 . 7/1/2010
With all due respect, this is going to be constructive.

Nice story. I felt like I was watching a classic horror movie with it's premise. You definitely left some parts to be further explained. So yeah, a chapter 2 is a must!

You have to develop on creating an atmosphere while storytelling.

Overall, you've got potential. Keep it up. :D