Reviews for In too deep
Bushwah chapter 1 . 10/9/2013
Aviendha was utterly terrifying.

You, however, were worse.

(I thought some genre-searching would get me some good reads, and by the love of giant bunny rabbits, I think I'm onto something here...)
absentmindedprofessor chapter 1 . 7/20/2012
Wow, gorgeous.
First of all, I love their names - Leander and Aviendha. They're beautiful. Secondly, the description of everything from their bodies to the terrifying ending was so awesomely written that I am jealous. :D And thirdly, I love the originality of this one-shot. It started out innocently with a boy admiring a girl, but quickly degenerated into something a lot more sinister than simple tomfoolery. Great job!
DofD chapter 1 . 10/2/2011
Gosh I love how different you're stories are.

((Sorry it's taking me so long to read all of them. I'm at work.))
GittaStar chapter 1 . 9/14/2011
So, giant bunnies are commen? And what does Pure blooded mean?
MazeRunner chapter 1 . 3/19/2011
The end was certainly unsuspected, but still totally awesome. You have a great way of keeping the readers attention to the very end. I found myself wondering what was wrong with this girl, why was she having sex with some random stranger: turns out she was a crazy murderer lol. Great story!
SpawnMeister666 chapter 1 . 10/20/2010
You seem to have a thing for beautiful women getting men all excited just to kill them! I think this side of your personality may put off any potential suitors you may have!

As for the story itself, giant bunnies and all, I like it. Just like everything else of yours, it is well written and although short, the character development is good.

Lee90 chapter 1 . 10/19/2010
Haha GiantBunnies, Funny. ánd nicely written :P

I love to read your stories! Great work -
ThatIsGreat chapter 1 . 10/7/2010
Lots of potential for this story! You should try to expand upon it, and it may turn out to be one of your best works.
MidnightRythm1990 chapter 1 . 10/1/2010
...unexpected is not quite the word I would use to describe that ending... Umm morbid, dark and totally awesome seems to be closer to point.
Pop the Bubble chapter 1 . 9/18/2010
Giant bunnies!

I like this alot. It's definitely different, and I think it works because it's a little more subtle... especially at the end with the twist, I think it came together really nicely!
tell it to the sky chapter 1 . 7/6/2010
when i first read this i was like GIANT BUNNIES? but hay it made me laugh! the end was kinda unexpected but i liked it!
AmoreJess chapter 1 . 7/4/2010
Well that was totally unexpected! It was weird - like BUNNIES? haha but interesting nonetheless. I quite enjoyed it. :)
HPRK08 chapter 1 . 7/4/2010
Woah okay then! Interesting ending, totally unexpected, especially from you! But great job.. Really. Great work!

castiel89 chapter 1 . 7/1/2010
You know, at first, I thought they were like Thumbelina sized, so the rabbits were normal size..

This was different, yet I really enjoyed it! Poor Leander though... Kinda a tragic hero-esque vibe to him (even if he didn't 'save' anyone).

There are some authors where I don't like reading the different 'themes' of their works, but I really enjoy all of yours.. So kudos to you!
hiyo-chan chapter 1 . 7/1/2010
it kinda reminds me of that fairytale i wrote once...except mine isnt as good as this o.o xD i rather like that. its like she set out to kill him from the begining...i knew it cuoldnt be good when she asked him to come out of the trees. I LOVE THIS. even though i kinda dont get why shed kill him if he was so mu- ohh. no one can exist as perfect as her. yes, that must be it. (LOL, now im rambling. xDD ) anywhos. YAY. MUR- Wwait...SEX! (lol, no, i am not high off sugar...or anything else...xD ) i hope this amuses you.
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