Reviews for Thr Rush of Tide
Marine Seraph chapter 1 . 7/2/2010
Beautifully lyrical and expressive! This part of the sentence didn't make sense to me "...spitting out the horrible briny water that was flecked her lips and tongue in fruitless attempt to rid herself of the flavor." There's also a few words you use in here, like "streak," that could be replace with more original comparisons, but other than that, lovely job!