|Reviews for The Way Things Are Now|
| Marine Seraph chapter 1 . 7/2/2010
Wow, this is a beautifully lyrical excerpt. I think it's an excerpt, isn't it? Or do excerpts have to come from larger works? I digress. Anyway, I can't help wondering if you could expand it. It appears visibly too short, but when you read it, you don't notice. Anyway, really nice job. I didn't notice grammar mistakes, but I wasn't looking much either. Most of the punctuation I did notice was spot-on. Keep up the good work! Great job!