Reviews for Broken
My Parakeet Has Issues chapter 1 . 7/15/2010
Once again, very nice!

My only "not positive" comment, is that the last line kind of interupted the flow of the piece, for me, but that's about it.

The mood in this is amazing.

I love the line "Hand crying red,"

A very sad pieice, but I loved it.

Sorry that this couldn't have been a better review,
Kader Gwyneth Marque chapter 1 . 7/13/2010
A scene well described that I could clearly envision. I almost felt the dryness of her feelings at the beginning, and later it was doused with the blood and drips of moonlight shimmering from the mirrors. And the way you worded it allows for the reader to create their own background story. Nice powerful language.