Reviews for HeartShaped Box
booboobeck95 chapter 8 . 7/29/2010
i love it this story is great!
Syd24 chapter 8 . 7/28/2010
Loved the story and Update :)

I would love, love, love! if you could check out my story More Than Human!

Update soon!
livingaliteraturelife chapter 8 . 7/28/2010
that was so ggod

keep it coming plz
honda35 chapter 8 . 7/28/2010
WOW THAT WAS HOT GO WILLOW. I HOPE JACK DOESN'T PLAY HER. PLEASE UPDATE SOON
checkyesdana chapter 8 . 7/28/2010
soo god! whata steamy/still cute scene
DELETE THIS ACCOUNT NOW 323402 chapter 8 . 7/28/2010
that was soo chapter

the whole chapter is fucking brilliant ;D

PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE UPDATE SOON ;D
Kalaina D. A. Lynn chapter 8 . 7/28/2010
:O its getting stemy between those two
WannabePhoebe chapter 8 . 7/28/2010
OMG! Update!Update!Update!...:D
Jevanminx chapter 8 . 7/28/2010
Hahahaha, busted! That was brilliant.

JM
Vampireacademyrox chapter 8 . 7/28/2010
love this chap i really want willow and jack to be together already they would be an awesome couple :D
jmr79au chapter 8 . 7/28/2010
The story is coming along well, and I am loving it.

My only problem is, and I have a feeling more people will make this comment, is that you had a section in there that really shouldn't have been in there about the secretary and affair. It jumped from asking about the birthday gift, to the affair, and then back to the birthday gift.

Also the arguement with Alec section didn't fit in properly. You just need to revise this section, add a few lines to tie it in, and it will be alright.

It also seemed rushed as there were alot of spelling mistakes.

But all that aside, I am liking where this story is going. Keep it up.

(Sorry if this makes you sad, but i am only trying to help with the constructive criticism.)
sdyedanney chapter 7 . 7/26/2010
thanks for the update. hoping for more!
checkyesdana chapter 7 . 7/26/2010
so good. i can't wait to see mroe bonding )
Twitdit chapter 7 . 7/26/2010
AW! Okay so i loved the hospital scene! That was so cute! But why must they both be so stuburn? haha :) WONDERFUL chapter! Please update SOON!
WannabePhoebe chapter 7 . 7/26/2010
Love ur story! please update soon:D
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