Reviews for Ashes to Ashes
RYTwinDemon chapter 3 . 7/5/2010
Ah. :(( That was so short! :(( Anyway, I loved the ending!... poor Shelby, though. I can only imagine what sort of turmoil she's going through. And I've never heard of Camazotz, so I'm really intrigued right now. :-) As short as this story was, I absolutely LOVED it, hahaha.
RYTwinDemon chapter 2 . 7/5/2010
Awesome fight scene. I love how Shelby isn't all-powerful. The ending was also really well-done... even if it IS a cliffie. :(( It's a good thing this is finished, hahaha. :-) Kudos to you for the awesome job!
RYTwinDemon chapter 1 . 7/5/2010
Oh, that's awesome. It's just the first chapter and I'm already hooked. :-) I've never seen the Vetala used on this site yet, and I'm really glad you have them on yours! :-) I'm really glad you have a background info on them too, hahaha. Most other authors don't really explain the creatures that appear in their stories... well, the ones on this site anyway. :-)