Reviews for A Storm Brews
XxXKristie MarieXxX chapter 1 . 7/24/2010
Not your best piece of work but its still a good poem. Your writting style is different for me so maybe thats why its a bit odd for me. But I think it could have possibly been slightly longer to help more with explaing because I was confused at first. But then I understood. Good job.

XKristie MarieX
Isca chapter 1 . 7/6/2010
"Hoping it'll fill the void. It doesn't." Holy smokes. The angst here is palpable. I like it!
4tehlessthan3of0scoreintennis chapter 1 . 7/4/2010
so close, and yet so far. that sucks. how's it going?