Reviews for Breaking Fate
Guest chapter 1 . 8/23/2018
I remembered when I first read this story, I love it.
But a year ago or so, I found a manga that has a similar storyline, Kono Koi wo Wasurenai. Back then, I didn’t really realised that I’ve seen this similar story plot.
I don’t mind that this was rewritten, but at least credit the origin.
frankenx chapter 8 . 7/3/2016
she sang a yellow card song omg omg omg XD XD
Sleepy Clouds chapter 9 . 4/22/2011
helloo! i really liked your story

i feel weird for crying when reading this story oh well thats just me

can i just say that your story is just perfect!

-Sleepy Clouds is to lazy to sign in...
isna chapter 9 . 12/16/2010
Woah I really liked your story! It wasn't rushed through even though it's only 9 chapters long (: thats a good thing btw :D truth to be told i actually anticipated noelle to be with Ian, they'd be cuter haha

Please continue writing
TMSantos chapter 9 . 11/1/2010
'Kay, I have to add: UPLOAD IAN'S STORY, PLEASE.

All your fans are dying, waiting for the upload. Well, if not all your fans, at least I'M dying.

Can't wait. AWESOMELY WRITTEN. TYPED. WHATEVER!
TMSantos chapter 1 . 11/1/2010
Just finished reading this for the second time. Can't stop saying to myself it's sweet.

Keep up the great work!
GoogleMyLove chapter 9 . 10/30/2010
Ian Story would be nice. Can we fans have it already, like, now? KTHNX.
NewMamma2013 chapter 9 . 10/24/2010
A review for an Ian Story! lol I'll keep a look out for it! Oh and by the way, this was awesome!
paranoia-stricken chapter 9 . 9/6/2010
SO STORY :D thanks :D
Neferpaige111 chapter 9 . 8/29/2010
Great job on this one... Loved the story... Loved the end how she got the guy instead of the silly sister :P Again great job :)
TTYL chapter 9 . 8/29/2010
I loved your story. It had a great plot to it. Some parts were a bit... confusing, might be the word or maybe saying that it didn't really all flow together would be better. But other than that your story was so amazing.

Here's one more review closer to inspire you for the Ian story which I'm sure will be just as great if not better. Good Job on the story!
Ali-Kernschatten chapter 9 . 8/29/2010
Cute story, I like it. However, some parts are kind of unbelievable. The emotions seem fairly realistic, but I think the characters lack emotional depth, as in they swing between emotions more easily than I would expect. This may, however, be a result of a lack of depth in the story. It's not a simple story, and you wrote it well, but the characters seem a tad 2-D. That's just my opinion, though, feel free to ignore it.
chukekazech89 chapter 2 . 8/29/2010
haha, i love this story :) it's heart-breaking ne nakakakilig to the bones :))
hello.hello.hello chapter 8 . 8/13/2010
Hi! When are you going to upload the ending? Please, please, please upload soon! I can't wait!
healthysadness chapter 1 . 8/3/2010
nice work, nery :) omagash! chapter 1 palang toh :) gatto read the others :)
23 | Page 1 2 Next »