Reviews for Breaking Fate |
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![]() ![]() I remembered when I first read this story, I love it. But a year ago or so, I found a manga that has a similar storyline, Kono Koi wo Wasurenai. Back then, I didn’t really realised that I’ve seen this similar story plot. I don’t mind that this was rewritten, but at least credit the origin. |
![]() ![]() ![]() she sang a yellow card song omg omg omg XD XD |
![]() ![]() helloo! i really liked your story i feel weird for crying when reading this story oh well thats just me can i just say that your story is just perfect! -Sleepy Clouds is to lazy to sign in... |
![]() ![]() Woah I really liked your story! It wasn't rushed through even though it's only 9 chapters long (: thats a good thing btw :D truth to be told i actually anticipated noelle to be with Ian, they'd be cuter haha Please continue writing |
![]() ![]() ![]() 'Kay, I have to add: UPLOAD IAN'S STORY, PLEASE. All your fans are dying, waiting for the upload. Well, if not all your fans, at least I'M dying. Can't wait. AWESOMELY WRITTEN. TYPED. WHATEVER! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Just finished reading this for the second time. Can't stop saying to myself it's sweet. Keep up the great work! |
![]() ![]() Ian Story would be nice. Can we fans have it already, like, now? KTHNX. |
![]() ![]() ![]() A review for an Ian Story! lol I'll keep a look out for it! Oh and by the way, this was awesome! |
![]() ![]() SO STORY :D thanks :D |
![]() ![]() ![]() Great job on this one... Loved the story... Loved the end how she got the guy instead of the silly sister :P Again great job :) |
![]() ![]() I loved your story. It had a great plot to it. Some parts were a bit... confusing, might be the word or maybe saying that it didn't really all flow together would be better. But other than that your story was so amazing. Here's one more review closer to inspire you for the Ian story which I'm sure will be just as great if not better. Good Job on the story! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Cute story, I like it. However, some parts are kind of unbelievable. The emotions seem fairly realistic, but I think the characters lack emotional depth, as in they swing between emotions more easily than I would expect. This may, however, be a result of a lack of depth in the story. It's not a simple story, and you wrote it well, but the characters seem a tad 2-D. That's just my opinion, though, feel free to ignore it. |
![]() ![]() ![]() haha, i love this story :) it's heart-breaking ne nakakakilig to the bones :)) |
![]() ![]() Hi! When are you going to upload the ending? Please, please, please upload soon! I can't wait! |
![]() ![]() ![]() nice work, nery :) omagash! chapter 1 palang toh :) gatto read the others :) |