|Reviews for A Thousand Words|
| dragonflydreamer chapter 1 . 10/16/2010
Very interesting! I kind of wish you used a thousand words, just for irony's sake, but that's just me, haha.
"the sun sparkles as it dances over the sea" I love that image.
"against the shadowed sand" Interesting description with "shadow."
"Placing slight against the millions of colours" This doesn't sound like it was worded right.
"trees falling to the sky" Love the word 'falling!'
Interesting choice with giving the dancing so many lines. Dancing really is such a beautiful, indescribable thing, isn't it?
Great images. I'm not sure whether you meant to list things and prove that they are indescribable, or if you were actually trying to capture them. If it's the second, you might want to take more time on each, but I love the variety that you do have.
| Princess-anna57 chapter 1 . 7/5/2010
Interesting and thought provoking. Well done. Keep it up!