|Reviews for a Ritual|
| Punslinger chapter 1 . 7/5/2010
"Kill the past parasite." I love that line-it says so much with calm impact. This is a fine "think piece" poem that doesn't let the thinking get in the way of its emotional appeal. I think that many of us have certain rituals for banishing "the ghost that wants possession." I know I do.
| Princess-anna57 chapter 1 . 7/5/2010
Aw, a great piece! Hopeful. I should take this advice :) Well done and keep it up.