I made it to your story at last. I love creation myths. There is one in every culture.

This is nicely written. So there is hope for Life after all.

Lovely story.

Though it relates to the Aert, I find that it can be read independent of Avalon too. :)

I like the personalisation of the Darkness. We have always associated Light with Supreme being so it feels different (but nice) to see Darkness being treated like that.

so I was excited to see that you were into drama on your profile, and went "This will be good," and I was not dissapointed.

I loved the story telling and the flow of your writing.

it was beautifully written and the imagery is vivid. Great work.

E- From the road house.