|Reviews for Faith and Hope|
| My Parakeet Has Issues chapter 1 . 8/18/2010
This was very good. Very hopeful. Had a strong message. I like that you wrote this in paragraph form, rather than poem. The rhyms were very good, didn't seem forced to me at all. Nice use of alliteration, consonance, and assonance. :)
Overall, very nice work.
My Parakeet Has Issues
| 14omoon chapter 1 . 7/6/2010
This is beautiful and explains SO much about the battle we as humans have in our faith in our Lord and Savior, u put it in clear words the pit inner turmoil, u ROCK!