|Reviews for Future Coming|
| Little girl Big world chapter 1 . 7/24/2010
"No breaks in pace or
Rewinds of events"
Like these lines :)
This piece was great!
| HighOnBrokenWings chapter 1 . 7/6/2010
I love people who can write short poems like this and actually make them really good.
You put so few words into it, but it had such a powerful meaning.
That last line was amazing. I especially like how you put it in bold to emphasise it.
Well done :)