Reviews for Future Coming
Little girl Big world chapter 1 . 7/24/2010
"No breaks in pace or

Rewinds of events"

Like these lines :)

This piece was great!
HighOnBrokenWings chapter 1 . 7/6/2010

I love people who can write short poems like this and actually make them really good.

You put so few words into it, but it had such a powerful meaning.

That last line was amazing. I especially like how you put it in bold to emphasise it.

Well done :)