Reviews for The Traveling Tales of the Gypsy Sun
64ShatteredButterflys chapter 3 . 7/8/2010
THIS IS QUITE GOOD!
OrangeXAngel chapter 3 . 7/8/2010
Another well-written chapter! Seriously, I think your descriptions are great. :) I know you updated this only today, but I can't wait for the next chapter. Update soon! :D
OrangeXAngel chapter 2 . 7/8/2010
Wow, I was really engrossed in this chapter. xD I wonder what's going to happen to poor Sobrina! Demetrius seems nice, but I agree with Sobrina, he doesn't seem right for her. I hope you update soon
OrangeXAngel chapter 1 . 7/8/2010
I don't know why there are no reviews for this because you have an beautiful chapter here! :) Your descriptions are excellent(I especially like the one where Sobrina was dancing, it was vivid and well-done!)and it's enough for a reader to be able to see the story in their own eyes(if that makes sense xD). This is only the 1rst chapter, but already, I could tell this is going to be interesting! :D The only critique I have is that maybe for the flashback, you could clarify that it is a flashback(ex. italicize, head it with the word flashback, etc...) so it's not as confusing. Anyway, I can't wait to find out more about the Gypsy Sun and who the person hiding in the tree was. I hope you keep writing! :)
Calaquend chapter 2 . 7/8/2010
I'm totally intrigued! I like the detail put in and the suspense towards the end-ah! So, you should write lots more :)
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