um let me think UPDATE! Let me give you a tip on fictionpress, the more chapters and complete stories you have more reviews and readers which make for happy writers! UPDATE SON

please write more. i really like it and if my opinion matters i think you should write more. i guess i already said that oh well. also i know its a selfish request but could you please read one of my stories. keep it up writing that is.

so far so good and following chapters will definently get better :)

please upload quickly, looking forward to see whats going to happen :)

As of now, it's pretty decent, but I'm sure it'll improve the more chapters you write. Good luck!