|Reviews for invisible ink|
| SilverTintedMist chapter 1 . 10/27/2012
Beautiful. I especially love the third stanza. I can emphasize
| lymli chapter 1 . 12/22/2010
that's a nice story, I guess it could be like a oldfashion rock song, I like the starting and the being invisible thing, everybody wants to be lost sometimes.
| Charming Dice chapter 1 . 8/3/2010
Really cool. I actually sang this while reading. Which is different, since I don't sing much. But it gave me a good feel of the flow of this.
My favorite part:
- The debris of dreams
- Mumbled apologies
- I search for a sign
- And what comes to mind is a scene
Good stuff. I'll catch you around.
| artofjula chapter 1 . 7/23/2010
This was really beautiful. Kinda made me wanna cry.
| HighOnBrokenWings chapter 1 . 7/7/2010
Wow. That was beautiful.
I love these lines:
"And because we both know
It's easier to leave
A mark on oneself than a
Scratch on society"
Those were very nice. It's kind of a song about songs. Great stuff :D