Reviews for The Spore of Lore who Could Roar
Garrett witcher chapter 1 . 7/3/2013
the reason i found this poem is because i had a dream.. i had a dream i was looking for purification. it was a very vivid dream and i saw beautiful flowers. and i said to myself "oh yeah they change every month" it made sense in the dream haha. anyway the words "spore of lore" kept coming up in my head as i slowly returned to waking consciousness. i looked it up online and found this poem that metaphorically resembles me and my present moment. very intriguing :)
My Parakeet Has Issues chapter 1 . 8/18/2010
A fun little poem, though a bit confusing in some places, and possibly not making any sense in other's. . . Still. I liked that you kept the same rhym sheme of aa throughout the entire thing, though I think you repeated some words a few times.

Really random.

I think my favorite line is "He liked to drink soda, and taste test fresh bread,". I don't know why. . .I like the way it reads, I suppose. :)

overall, fun, though some end words were repeated and some of the sentences didn't make sense. . . But still, fun. :)

Keep Writing,

My Parakeet Has Issues