Reviews for Wanted
Mocking-Jay-of-Phoenix chapter 3 . 9/27/2010
i am subscribing , your writing is good and creative
BalletGirl98 chapter 5 . 9/26/2010
Finally! LOVE IT!
Livvy Grace chapter 4 . 7/21/2010
Oh I know who this Amelia girl is! And I know how she knows Eli! Haha! Keep up the good work sis!

Update soon please!

~S&S~
BalletGirl98 chapter 4 . 7/21/2010
OMGS!

FINALLY! I LOVED IT! CANNOT WAIT FOR THE NEXT CHAP!
imagine.write.thrive chapter 3 . 7/15/2010
I like it so far. :3

There were some small grammatical errors, but nothing too big.

~Emma
TK Anez chapter 3 . 7/9/2010
Hey, another update :) I like your dialogue here, it flows naturally and it was always clear who was talking (i've seen other stories where that gets really messy with dialogue between many people). One thing is that when you tag dialogue, you separate the quote and the tag with a comma. For example:

"Thanks Chris." I said.

should be

"Thanks Chris," I said.

I just take a lot of writing classes, so that stands out to me lol. Looking forward to another chapter! :D
Livvy Grace chapter 3 . 7/9/2010
I loved the confrontations between Kara and Chris and Lillie and Eli. I was laughing. I can't wait for the next chappy!

Update soon please!

~S&S~
BalletGirl98 chapter 1 . 7/8/2010
It was really really really really good.I loved it!Update quickly!
TK Anez chapter 2 . 7/8/2010
Hey I liked your story :) But it was too short i wanna read more lol... maybe you could take a look at my story, Ishiki... I'd love your opinion :) Keep writing!
Livvy Grace chapter 2 . 7/8/2010
I was laughing so hard! That was hilarious!

Update soon please!

~S&S~
Livvy Grace chapter 1 . 7/7/2010
I loved it! It was intriguing and had me laughing! Keep it up!

Update soon please!

~S&S~