Reviews for Work
lymli chapter 1 . 11/3/2010
aw, this sounds so stressful :)
Bonelfasem chapter 1 . 7/8/2010
just to point out, i think that u missed out a word in 'soon there will food' is it meant to be 'soon there will be food'?

its good metaphors btw, and u let the persons mind run wild with this, giving them anythin to create who the people are. i like it :)